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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?

#people #computers #hindrance #help
The computer machine
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are
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 great
inovation
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innovation
 by the mankind it has changed
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 life
i
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dont
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don't
 see
this
 machine as
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distractful
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distrustful
 thing because in
village
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 many people do their documentation work through,
this
 machine At present, a large number of
children
 spend most of their time indoors and have less exposure to the external world because of the busy tempo of modern life.
Children
 will have
insufficiency
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 of experience with and
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lack of understanding of nature,
consequently
, these will affect
children
 in
negative
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 way and may cause some problems with them in the future. When
children
 mostly stay indoors and do not experience outdoor
activities
, they will not have out-of-classroom experiences.
Children
 should be stimulated to discover their surrounding
enveroment
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environment
environments
.
In addition
, they should be encouraged to solve some problems from easy to difficult in order to their proper developments.
For example
, my
parents
 took me to the sea when I was a child. While I was walking on the beach, I am learning some small creatures under the sand
such
 as crabs and shells.
Moreover
, my
parents
 took me to the aquarium, I learnt about submarine lives. From my perspective, the knowledge and experiences which were produced while we were young will influence us to solve some tough problems in the future. Apart from these, one of the disadvantages of not spending their time outdoors is
lack
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 of social skills. They should play outsides with their friends. Doing
activities
 with
others
 helps them to learn how to communicate and live with
others
.
For instance
,
parents
 took their
children
 to play with other
children
 in the park. Their
children
 could learn how to play with their friends,
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 their toys
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others
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 in their groups.
Thus
, they will learn how to live peacefully with
others
. In my opinion, their social skills
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 not less important than their knowledge because successful people should have both
of
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cognitive
intelligent
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 and
emotional
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intelligent
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. In summary, when
children
 always
stays
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 indoors and
not
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 go
out
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door
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 to do interesting
activities
,
children
 will get
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 chances to learn new abilities and social skills. So, they might be inferior capabilities and they might not be able to apply their knowledge in
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problem solving
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 process. As I have
mention
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,
that is
 a reason why
parents
 should encourage their
children
 to participate in outdoor
activities
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