Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

The extinction of creatures and loss

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of bio-diversity

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are affected by human activities

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the global ecosystem. There are various reasons for

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, but measures could be taken to tackle

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problem. There are several explanations for the human activities have negative effects on the population of species and bio-diversity on the world’s ecosystem.

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, overhunting wild

animals

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increases

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significantly all over the world.

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is because

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and companies earn huge

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amount of money from trading wild

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’ body

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parts

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, meat and feathers,

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will poach wild

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as bears, crocodiles and rhinos as much as possible.

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,

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dump numerous

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amount of

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waste

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on the oceans.

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is largely detrimental for marine

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which thought

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waste

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like

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their food,

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they will die

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they cannot digest

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waste

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like

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containers and

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bottles.

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, according to a survey by Vietnam express in 2020 in Nha Trang, 5% of

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the population

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of turtles decreased per year because they ate

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containers which floated on the surface of

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Trang sea. In order to address

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issue, governments should take a few steps. One might be to impose strict laws on

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and

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organizations

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who hunt wild

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for trading and producing

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. By doing

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,

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and organizations will have to decline the poaching

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which lives in forests and safaris. Another sensible approach is that governments should have programmes to enhance people’s awareness about

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effects of

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waste

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to

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marine creatures.

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, people will have actions

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are more environmentally friendly than before

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as reducing, recycling and reusing

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waste

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or taking

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in the ocean regularly. In conclusion, there are a

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species and biodiversity are on the brink of extinction because of

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the influences

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of humans on the global ecosystem.

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,

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problem will be less likely to happen if governments impose strict rules on

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and companies and organize projects to

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the publics’ perception.