Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture & character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or not?

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Our desire to see and judge people around us has always been a
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problematic issue in modern day’s society. Some believe that we can understand our nearby people’s
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by spending
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with them and observing their natural
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; others may disagree
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perspective and say that they can understand people’s
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by observing how they use
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. In my opinion, modern-day humankind has much more complexity and
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than before and we can’t understand them by one course of their actions. The reasons would be our complexity, our nearby social life and our
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to be complex and outlandish in their personality day by day. We have more layouts in our
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and
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than we think. When we see I person
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glance, we see their facial expressions, their gestures and how they wear cloth; but we get closer and make a
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, we may simply find out that how they behave, is
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nothing close to how they wear
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. One may wear a diplomat’s suit, but know nothing of diplomacy, so does a person who
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a t-shirt of a football player, and doesn’t even know that player or care about football and just liked the
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. Where we live and
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with
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we socialize, can
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we choose our
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. People around us can make us behave and
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in a certain
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; we always see those who go in a crowd, engage
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with them, make friends, become a part of that crowd, and after a while, wear and
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like that crowd without even noticing. It is
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we live. A person who lives in a city with some restricting religious rules of wearing cloth
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may have no choice other than clothing in that
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, even when they themselves don’t want to. To know one’s
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and personality or even culture, we have to spend
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with them. We may
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differently with a stranger we saw in street and had a quick
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,
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when we are with our own friends and family. Even in that case, the
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we talk and
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in front of our friends may not be suitable for a family gathering. So, it’s really hard to tell how is someone’s
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and we must spend
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with them. So, as we saw, in order to understand people’s
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, we have to know their social life, spend
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with them and try to dig in and figure out their complexities, and
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we may be able to understand them by their
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! So
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you want to judge some stranger in street, just make sure you know
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by all means, or just walk away and don’t think of it anymore.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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