Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that modern developments in medicine and engineering are advanced so far because of the application of scientific methodologies by

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researchers.

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some argue that

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this

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research

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practices

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should be only conducted by the

goverments

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government

governments

while protesters

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that private sectors should lead the way. One of the driving

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in the area of

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is the

availbility

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availability

of funding,

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supporters suggest that

goverment

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government

agencies are in a better position

initiate

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the process.

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is because

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facilities

such

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as

laboratries

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laboratories

are usually expensive and their maintenance

incur

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substantial

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amount of money.

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, private companies may not be interested in those projects without immediate returns,

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as space exploration spearheaded by NASA. If

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all the space

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is left to

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private entities, there may never be any significant progress made in the advancement of rocket technologies.

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,

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government

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should decide which area of study should receive the larger share of the money necessary for the

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.

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, it can be argued that most government ministries are mired in unnecessary bureaucracies.

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of

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the hierarchical structures of the government

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time to process even the smallest matters in every step of the approval process.

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, stem cell

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on

human

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which has

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potential to cure cancer and replace organs is strictly banned by most

goverment

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government

movement

out of the fear that

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could result in the impairment of human sanctity.

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restrictions could impede the progress of medical

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.

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, if the

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matter is freely allowed to the private companies, the free market economy would bring the most efficient and cost-effective technologies in

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relatively short period of time. In summary, while

goverments

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governments

government

play an important role in funding

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research

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for the betterment of science and technologies, I believe that the efficiency and directness of

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private organizations should be taken into account as well.