In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?
To date, in most countries, people would choose their attire and hairdos based on
the
current trends. These changes have had a huge impact on our lives. Yet it has both pros and cons. The following paragraphs will discuss the key factors of Correct article usage
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this
scenario as well as
the consequences.
To commence with, it can not be denied that the
fashion updation has been in Correct article usage
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human's
life for ages. Even I would say that homosapians had changed their clothes from leaves to Change noun form
human
animal's
skin mere result of fashion curiosity. Since Change noun form
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then
, humans have always been in changing mode
of dressing sense and hairstyles. Fix the agreement mistake
modes
Nevertheless
, I wonder how this
tendency had a smash sensation around the world at the same time?
Perhaps there are two main reasons to substantiate Change the punctuation
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this
statement. Firstly
, good clothing and trendy hairstyles have been a symbol of affluence. For example
, on ,occasions people always end up spending too much money on Change noun form
designer
designer's
boutiques.
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designer
Secondly
, due to
mass business and frequent advertisements teens would buy unwanted things then
they will deem that as super cool. To add further
, if any other kids, in their community, wear less attractive dress
might be considered abnormal, Fix the agreement mistake
dresses
not to mention
there is a high chance to get
bullied by others. Undoubtedly, the fashion industry has become a well-paid area, though Change preposition
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on the other hand
, to earn money they are exploiting other labour. For instance
, brand companies like Gucci,Michal Kors and Guess made their customers
mindset Change to a genitive case
customer's
customers'
like
expensive one is quality Change preposition
that
one
which is most of the time not true.
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To conclude
, from
my point of view that up-to-date trendy and Change preposition
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being
tidy is essential for a better appearance, Unnecessary verb
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although
it must not be a waste of money. Because this
inclination might give
psychological disturbance to underprivileged people.Verb problem
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task response
The essay discusses the impact of fashion trends on people's clothing and hairstyles, and it considers both the positive and negative aspects. However, some points are unclear and the examples provided could be stronger and more relevant.
coherence and cohesion
The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, the ideas are not always logically organized, and some sentences lack coherence and do not flow well.