Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

Children are the tender buds of society and they are required to be taught the true

values

of life.

Therefore

, some people tend to believe that the feeling of the game should be infused in them

while

others

believe that the possession of cooperative

values

is required for them. I will discuss the merits and demerits of

both

aspects before reaching any opinion.

To begin

with, there are many reasons why children should

be having

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computational

values

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Firstly

, match motivates youngsters to accelerate their efforts to attain a higher level

in

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education and in other activities. They start

doing work

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hard to compete with

others

and understand the value of hard work.

This

dedication and hard work help them to stand first everywhere.

Secondly

, computational

values

inculcate self-confidence and self-independence in children. When they participate in activities and compete with

others

, they are more likely to have a feeling of self-achievement and fulfilment. They feel worthy

that

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provide

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them balanced and peaceful mind. They tend to become self-reliant and that

result

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in the best

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ability in them.

Moreover

, a sense of completion is the need of the hour. Undoubtedly, in the modern era, people

since

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their

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childhood till adults, face completion

for example

- in

school

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there are

a

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dance

championship

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championships

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,

race

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,

poem

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and poem

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tournament

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and when they

grow

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adults, they face

trial

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in

taking

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a job

while

taking admission

in

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college and even face competitive in an exam.

Thus

, a value is highly required.

On the other hand

, it is needless to say

that

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how important is it to inculcate the value of cooperation.

This

is the only feeling by which a child can learn teamwork, team spirit, co-existence, tolerance, and patience.

Moreover

, if history is seen it becomes quite evident that the well-known icons of the society are only those who had a helping and sacrificing attitude. A self-centred human being cannot earn fame in society.

Secondly

, incessant preaching

for

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sport

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sports

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may result in rivalry

feeling for

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between

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the peer group and

others

. These

rivalry

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feelings take no time

in turning

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into jealousy and personal grudges. A heart full of jealousy for

others

can never hold good for themselves and for

others

.

To conclude

, after gauging

both

, competitional and cooperative

values

, I feel that

both

values

have their own importance.

Thus

, a child should be brought up by imparting

both

equally