Write about the following topic: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Competition and

cooperation

are so crucial among children. When we force them to do something we should learn them both being collaborators and a rival. According to adults imposing one of them on our heirs is obliged, while some people advocate that teaching competition to kids is more important, while others are of the opinion that

cooperation

should be encouraging. I reckon that both are an indispensable part of their lives, yet

cooperation

should outweigh.

First

of all, being a rival is taught especially at sport competitions

such

as swimming or tennis clubs.

This

emotion is imposed so that little athletes can assimilate it and will be more competitive in the future. We can see beneficial results in Rafael Nadal's life. According to his words, if his trainer who is

also

his uncle didn't force him to be so ambitious and competitive, he wouldn't reach what he achieved today.

This

situation may not give certain consequences and may create problematic conditions like its adverse challenges on me. When I was 6 years old I

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exposed to

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opinions. I was a tennis player and our couches were really ambitious and they were forcing us to compete with our best friends. Their intent was to show us

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the difference between a friend a rival.

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, in the

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we were all quite the club since we were falling out

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every day. For

this

reason, when I become a coach I have never internalized

this

attitude. Yet,

this

can be effective for some kids because there are plenty of personality types.

On the other hand

, collaborative attitudes are a key aspect of kids lives. They should learn to work with their peers so that they will an opportunity to gain new viewpoints. Our opinions were created when we were children. What we have learned from the environment influence our prejudices, thoughts and lifestyles when we become adults.

Therefore

, if we want to make our heirs more social, sympathiser and responsible in the future, we should put

such

emotions during their childhood period. That's why I agree with the argument that

cooperation

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competition. To sum up, collaboration and contest are two crucial aspects of the life of a kid. While adults are teaching these senses they must remember that what they've learned will affect their entire nature. For

this

reason, I advocate the idea that being collaborative is more important since when they become older they may have common sense, a tendency to empathy with others or interact with humans more easily.