Some people think that use of social networking apps is very beneficial in today's world. some say that it put negative impacts on the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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forms
such
views express both negative and positive impacts. It can be rightly said that as a result
of technological advancement, people
have become more connected via these new ways of getting together. This
is quite beneficial, however
, it has deprived the same folks the
ability to physically connect with those that are present with them, which is an issue nowadays in our society. Change preposition
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This
essay will discuss both views and give the
opinion in the concluding part.
These socialising Correct article usage
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apps
have connected so many people
together. Powered by the internet, these apps
have connected people
that would never have been able to see each other, talk less of talking to each other because of distance. For instance
, I am a Nigerian and yet I have friends
in China, but frankly speaking, I would never have been able to connect to those friends
of mine if not for these apps
. As such
, the apps
have turned the world into a global village and distance is nothing again.
On the other hand
, people
are becoming detached from those physically with them. Since the world is now a global village, you can have so many friend
online that you do not even have time to attend to the Change to a plural noun
friends
friends
physically around you. For example
, I have been at a dinner with friends
such
that no one was talking to each other for a long time because they were all chatting on their phones with online friends
. A situation as such
gradually weakens strong physical connections.
Finally
, some people
have the view that the
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apps
have both good and bad influence
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influences
this
essay, we have discussed the fact that it has turned the world into a small community, while on the other hand
, we discussed that it is gradually creating distance between people
that are even physically together. However
, in my opinion, I do agree that it is more beneficial for our society.Submitted by Kemi111 on
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