Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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evolving and

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,most employers choose a bigger area for working

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of different cubicles.I believe the disadvantages outweigh the

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,a bigger space can be distracting to many employees and

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teams are not able to maintain their privacy,while some

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are it enhances teamwork and improves the bond among staff.

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work space

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can be distracting for most of the workers in that,most of them are unable to concentrate well on their job assigned to them and

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are not able to meet their deadlines.

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,productivity decreases

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.Most workers

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tend to play around during working hours because

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their colleagues are their friends and by so doing neglecting their

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for the day.

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,they are not able to maintain their privacy because of the space.

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is because some assignments are supposed to be kept a secret but due to the area where working is commencing,information

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is supposed to be kept out of the reach of other employees is released.

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it improves

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because workers are found to

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together in teams because of where they

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and

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increases the bond between them.

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job offices have a bigger surface area office

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of separate rooms and

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their development. To conclude,I believe the disadvantages which are distracting and

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lack of privacy outweighs the

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of teamwork and improves the bond among staff.