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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#offices #open-space #designs #rooms #work #outweigh
The world and everything in it
is
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 evolving and
hence
,most employers choose a bigger area for working
instead
 of different cubicles.I believe the disadvantages outweigh the
advantages
becsuse
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because
,a bigger space can be distracting to many employees and
also
 teams are not able to maintain their privacy,while some
advantages
 are it enhances teamwork and improves the bond among staff.
To begin
 with,a large
work space
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 can be distracting for most of the workers in that,most of them are unable to concentrate well on their job assigned to them and
hence
 are not able to meet their deadlines.
Therefire
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Therefore
,productivity decreases
as a result
.Most workers
also
 tend to play around during working hours because
the
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their colleagues are their friends and by so doing neglecting their
work
 for the day.
On the other hand
,they are not able to maintain their privacy because of the space.
Thjs
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This
 is because some assignments are supposed to be kept a secret but due to the area where working is commencing,information
which
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 is supposed to be kept out of the reach of other employees is released.
In contrast
,some
advantages
 are that
,
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it improves
team
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teamwork
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work
 because workers are found to
work
 together in teams because of where they
work
 and
also
 increases the bond between them.
For instance
,in the United States of
America
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another
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of
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job offices have a bigger surface area office
instead
 of separate rooms and
hence
 their development. To conclude,I believe the disadvantages which are distracting and
also
 lack of privacy outweighs the
advantages
 of teamwork and improves the bond among staff.
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