A problem has occurred on the road outside your house. Write a letter to the local councilor. In your letter -Introduce yourself -Explain the problem -State what action you would like him to take

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding a recent racial fight that has occurred yesterday in front of the street where my home is located. About myself, I, Toriqul, Byron, am a resident, who live in

this

area for 10 years now and have no issues with any of my neighbours up to now.

That is

why I believe that I am living in a peaceful community where everyone is respected. My neighbours have participated in a foul-mouthed argument

last

week, which lead to the fight and one of them has ended up in hospital now.

Therefore

, people’s are agitated as Mr Kali attacked Mr Brian due to racial slurs while I was watching

this

incident.

Consequently

, I would be happy if you take the necessary steps to sort

this

issue on a positive note, which could defuse the current situation in the community. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith

Submitted by toriqul1976 on Fri Dec 03 2021

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