Several people believe that volunteer community service should be a compulsory part of school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children).

Several people believe that volunteer community service should be a compulsory part of school programs (
for example
working for a
charity
, improving the
neighborhood
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, or teaching sports to younger children). I agree with that proposal because it helps to grow responsibility among young people and nurtured kindness. The
first
reason why I agree is that I adopted a stray cat, and maybe it was beginning my long way to
charity
. Since
this
episode of my life, I become another person. I have life experiences with
charity
and unpaid jobs when I was a student, I have been helping shelters for over 5 years. I was disappointed that I did not start early. And I recommended it for all people to engage with the
charity
and begin to help. You can start with little deeds like always breeding stray animals, helping for shelters. The
second
reason was charities and all like these unpaid jobs improve your resume and in the future help you to achieve scholarship. Many esoteric lovers said
charity
helps for our karma and purify our life. And I agree that
charity
and like these volunteer jobs must be the main part of school programs because if we start is that young age we will educate more humanities, kindness in our children. Because little children like a sponge absorb all deeds, sometimes kind and another way cruel. And we must be an example for future generations and help them with including a
charity
in the school program.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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