Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies.to what extent do you think are consumers influenced by the advertisement? what are the measures can be taken to protect them?

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In recent times ,most of the end-users feel irritated by the upsurge amount of commercials from marketing companies. I personally believe that consumers have a huge impact by the different types of adverts but some points can be considered to shield them . My opinion ,as well as solutions, are seen in
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paragraphs. The
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and foremost reason behind consumers have influenced on advertisement is that
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because of the informational aspects of the products which, is related about size, appearance , colour , how to use it gives information to consumers to buy
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product
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or not.
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, another reason is that some advertisement gives transformational thought to an individual's mind .
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, if some advertisement is taken by a well-known celebrity
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they may think in a different perspective ,by seeing other celebrities use
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product
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some of the people thought that they should
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buy
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product
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,some of the solutions can be taken for
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trend. The
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one is government should make some laws or policies regarding
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types of adverts.
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,they should monitor some commercials like if it is harmful to youngsters ,
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, Alcohol beverages related.
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,some individuals
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have to take some steps by searching the
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reviews on the internet or else they should check the ingredients the products contain as well as by seeing some videoes about the
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which they think to buy,
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,they may get an idea that of
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product
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is reliable to buy or not . In conclusion , I think that end-users are influenced by a variety of advertisements due to informational aspects,
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some steps should be taken by them to protect themselves from any harmful contains.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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