The world would be a much poorer place without colour. To what extent would you agree or disagree.

Colours
are one of the greatest blessings that god has bestowed upon people in the
world
. Have you ever thought
what
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it would be like to live in a
world
without
colour
.
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Forget everything for a moment and start using your imagination. Try to think how you would feel if people, cats, dogs, birds, butterflies and fruits had no
colour
at all. You would never want to live in
such
a
world
. Would you?
Colours
have a crucial role in man’s communication with the outside
world
and in the proper functioning of his memory. Hearing or touch alone, are not enough to define objects. How can we define colourless flowers placed on a colourless table
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eye can recognise millions of
colours
. Identifying objects and our surroundings are not the only benefits of a diversity of
colours
.
Colours
also
give us a lot of pleasure. The beautiful blue sky, the blood red sunset or a rainbow after a rainfall do add happiness to our lives. The
colours
of nature have been arranged so as to appeal to the human soul. Nowadays some prisons are painted pink and green to put prisoners in a better mood.
Colours
hold a special significance in our culture
also
. In some parts of the
world
white is worn for weddings and black for funerals. In other parts white is the
colour
of mourning. Red is the symbol of love. Red
also
represents danger. Blood is red; fire engines are red and traffic signals are
also
red
Colours
also
reflect the personality of a person. The
colour
of your clothes can have a considerable impact on how you are perceived. Light
colour
reflects a sober personality.
Colours
also
have been used as a treatment
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some mental disorders. To put it in a nutshell, I can say that the
world
would definitely be a much poorer place without
colour
. They add life and beauty to our
world
.
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