buying things on the internet, such as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Owing to the fact that nowadays everyone is liking the new ways of purchasing anything online and it is quite famous

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of

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kind of shopping will surely outweigh the demerits of

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buying. As per my perspective, online shopping has

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various benefits

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to offline which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, e-shopping came in the market with full of advantages as people can order items round the clock by sitting anywhere in the world. As nowadays, schedule of each and every people is very busy and they do not have enough time to visit the stores.

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, by a single click over the mobile apps,

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Flipkart, Grofers, Big Basket, Amazon, Paytm,Make my Trip, Trivago, Kindle, Myntra, all the problems can get

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.

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it is a home essential or buying the clothes on the internet, customers love to browse the products, add them

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a wishlist, and make the payment at the end.

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, sometimes circumstances arrive in the life when one

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to travel into

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another country or city, so in

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situation booking of

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the ticket

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is significantly very easy through those apps and soft copy of the ticket can be taken in the airport.

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saves a lot of time. Recently, when it comes to reading books, no one wants to carry reading materials along with them

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the flight or train because it weighs so much. Due to

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book lovers subscribe

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e-books which

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free of cost as well

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trial version.

On the other hand

, sales

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shown a sharp fall at the retail shops. Since they are visited by few

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of consumers as they cannot afford to provide high rates of discount.

As a result

, shopkeepers income have reduced as compared to past and it becomes slightly difficult for them to run their houses,

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basic needs of own as well as of their family.

Furthermore

, Local tour and travel agencies business got

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demolished

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due to the fact of profit margins got declined.

In addition

, the Books are being bought by very less number of customers, while at the moment they are taking interest in Amazon Kindle, e-books, pdf or soft copies that's why

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copy of the books kept in the stores for a long time. To conclude, in my opinion, online shopping has a lot of pros than cons,

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all the person.

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advantages have

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the disadvantages because

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sort of e-commerce

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have made life easy and comfortable.