buying things on the internet, such as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Owing to the fact that nowadays everyone is liking the new ways of purchasing anything online and it is quite famous
also
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the merits
this
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such
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compare
to offline which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, e-shopping came in the market with full of advantages as people can order items round the clock by sitting anywhere in the world. As nowadays, schedule of each and every people is very busy and they do not have enough time to visit the stores. Wrong verb form
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Moreover
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ticket
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saves a lot of time. Recently, when it comes to reading books, no one wants to carry reading materials along with them Linking Words
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On the other hand
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of consumers as they cannot afford to provide high rates of discount. Change to a plural noun
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As a result
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Furthermore
, Local tour and travel agencies business got Linking Words
demolised
due to the fact of profit margins got declined. Correct your spelling
demolished
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In addition
, the Books are being bought by very less number of customers, while at the moment they are taking interest in Amazon Kindle, e-books, pdf or soft copies that's why Linking Words
hard
copy of the books kept in the stores for a long time.
To conclude, in my opinion, online shopping has a lot of pros than cons, Add an article
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