In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Since cities and towns had started to grow, accommodation was a severe role in

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human life. While people in many countries consider renting as a much reasonable option, others claim that they prefer to buy a

home

or apartment regardless of any obstacles. In

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phenomenon along with my personal opinion about

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of

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matter. People who tend to buy a

home

usually have two major arguments.

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, they argue that buying an apartment or a house is some kind of investment for their future.

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statement can be seen especially in undeveloped or developing nations, so crowds try to somehow rescue their money and

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from economical threats.

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traditional societies like Iran. In these countries, having

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accommodation for your own will demonstrate your wealth and power so you can introduce yourself in

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as an independent member.

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, with a closer observation, we can see

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way of thinking comes from

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economy and obsolete attitudes. Now we can ask

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method in our life? According to the researches, if you are living in a country

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you can be sure about having a job or government support, it is better to consider renting as your primary choice,

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if you are young.

Otherwise

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rate in your society is high and you have money to get a proper apartment, you should buy one in favour of at least being sure about your

home

in case of unemployment.

Hence

, the correctness of

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decision is dependent on your location and your country’s economic level. All in all, while uncountable people living in renting places, there are a group who prefer to have their own accommodation. In my view, it is not a phenomenon that can be

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easily and has a direct connection with your location and situation. But obviously, it is not bad

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all to buy a

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home

if you can afford it.