You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: -What course are you doing now -Why you are not satisfied with that course -what course would you like to change to

Dear Mr Thompson, I am Mike Rogers, a current student of the Social Sciences department in the Psychology program. Following the curriculum stated by the department, I am required to choose a course within social sciences, but different from my core programme.
Therefore
, I decided on Architecture 101; a class given by Professor Smith at 8am every Tuesday. Even though his class is magnificent, rich in content and hooking, I am being forced to request a change in my timetable. The reason for
this
petition is that I am requested by social services to attend every day at the auditorium from 7 to 8:30 am, overlapping my schedule.
However
, I have noticed that professor Smith is giving the same lecture every Monday in the afternoon;
Therefore
I believe a change only in my schedule will not affect my performance, as I already have adapted to his teaching methods. I am open to discussing any other solution for
this
situation, I can be reached by any channel registered on the student website. Sincerely, Mike Rogers
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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