some people think the best way to solve global enviromental problems is to increase the cost of fuel to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every country faces global environmental problems and they are very concerned about how to decrease those problems.
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, it is sometimes thought the best way to solve it
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increase the cost of fuel. In my opinion, I considered that environmental issues can be solved in different manners. There are several reasons to decline the matter of global environmental. The
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and foremost important thing is that to ban the single-use of
plastic
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is a non-biodegradable item and it is very harmful to the environment.
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, in one survey has conducted in the UK, 50% of environmental causes are happened by
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, if government take
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strict action against
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of
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bottles, straws, carry bags and so on so,it is possible to reduce that problem. Another point to consider to solve the environmental problem is to encourage
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more plantations. In big cities, more
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are doing deforestations to build tall buildings and industries and it
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affects weather changes.
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, without
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it is very hard to keep the air clean and neat and
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are getting a lack of rain.
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,
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and trees are the best way to stop
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, fuel is responsible for getting more issues in
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. nowadays persons prefer their own vehicles for transportations and
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trend is booming.
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, raising the cost of
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fuel
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could
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to fall down the global warming. In conclusion, numerous ways are available to solve the global environmental issues and government should encourage
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to use renewable things and try to solve them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • emissions
  • alternative energy
  • conservation
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy technologies
  • affordability
  • collective action
  • innovation in energy efficiency
  • global cooperation
  • environmental measures
  • pollution
  • economic disparity
  • revenue
  • sustainable development
  • environmental sustainability
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