Some people believe that upbringing of child is responsibility of a mother. Others say this responsibility lies with father. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A school of thought holds that the

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is liable for their child's upbringing;

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others reckon it is the

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's

responsibility

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. In the following essay, I will elaborate on both notions

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provide evidence that supports my view that childraising requires a combination of both

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and

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. In many parts of the world nowadays, some people believe that mothers only play a weaker role in family relationships, and should do household-related chores, especially childcare. More sadly, an obsolete prejudice of seeing mothers as an influencer of their

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remains subliminally in some individuals' mindsets in some countries,

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as VietNam or Pakistan.

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,

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can be heavily impacted by their

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despite the ongoing efforts of the

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in some situations.

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, a

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can not

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bear the burden of raising a child as they are mostly the main breadwinner in a family, meaning they have to suffer accumulated stress from the outside.

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, it is

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role that some people falsely assume

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correlates to the

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's duty of nurturing their

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, even in emotional or moral development. In my opinion, a shared

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of parenting should significantly benefit their

children

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and the family. Parents can support each other in childcare so that both will be more flexible in their work, and, more importantly,

children

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can feel the love of the

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and

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's role.

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not only helps

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to develop emotionally but

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become more confident and moral. In conclusion, it is wrong to emphasize each gender's

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in nurturing

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because one-sided duty can not lead to an expected child,

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a shared

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being prioritized in a family.