In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss and give an opinion

It is considered that the salary for some individuals should be cut down due to the fact that
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earning
unappropriately
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inappropriately
high
in contrast
to others.
However
, some peoples` view is that
people
with significant
money
can
cantribute
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contribute
to the
country
positively. Many
people
believe that
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country
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exact
exist
features who unfairly earn huge
money
for their jobs and the government must
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eliminate
such
situation.
This
statement could be caused because of dissatisfying
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done works
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For example
, in our
country
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enormous
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Moreover
, their decisions do not meet the expectation of the crowd.
Nonetheless
,
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of life
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above, if it is compared with the mass. Another thought is that
people
with
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salary
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can donate to the state and be beneficial for
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further
development. Because community with
money
could invest
money
for those things
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nessary
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necessary
for society in
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time. Since
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disclosing a private organisation does not demand
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of documents.
In addition
,
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qualitative
work will be done in
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time.
For instance
,
last
year the school with modern innovations was opened up by wealthy
people
in Almaty. As a
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result
, society has
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opportunity
to be educated in
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building. I think some person earn
crusially
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crucially
not normal
money
for nothing.
However
, If they make benefit to
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the country
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then
it is not so sharp.To illustrate, bloggers` salary is being high right now. But some of them help to improve
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of life of others. To conclude, there is
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question about limiting earning for some
individual
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individuals
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or
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them take their cash in order to
enhace
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enhance
the
well- being
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of the state. The main point is that the government should take measures and come up with an explanation to the questions of population.
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