Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People have two opinions regarding the ideal age for
children
to start formal education. Some believe that they should start after 7
years
while other states they should begin at an early
life
.
This
writing will put forwards the points regarding both views.
Initially
, starting at an early
life
means preparing the child from the beginning for the future but, it can result in compromise with their
childhood
.
On the other hand
, after 7
years
gives
children
ample amount of time to enjoy the
childhood
but, can result in compromise with their studies. According to
me
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, both the points are extreme, we should ideally go somewhere in the middle.
Firstly
, studies should begin in
a
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very early
life
. It includes preparing the offspring for the future in advance. Sending the child to pre-schools when they cross 2
years
can be both positive and negative. On one hand, the kid can learn from the starting and will be well advance from the other offspring of the same group.
In contrast
, initial
years
they struggle to speak, walk by
this
age. If the study burden is put,
childhood
can be compromised and so does the growth.
For instance
, my cousin was sent to pre-school when he was 2
years
. Though, today he is ahead in section when compared to other
children
of his
life
but, he had missed the opportunities like playing in the park.
Secondly
, offspring should be sent after they complete 7
years
. Letting the offspring enjoy
childhood
well but, if
children
have nothing to study for 7
years
, they might find it difficult to start after it as they are now comfortable with playing all time.
For example
, according to the survey on
children
behaviour and success rate, it has been found that
children
who start late are more inclined towards bad habits like gambling, theft, as they have time and don't know its proper utilization. To conclude, in my
opinion
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all the points are extreme. Middle
life
of around some 3
years
is perfect for a kid to start with school. The child is capable of speaking and walking properly and can now understand the content well.
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