In many countries, the amount if crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
These days, criminal activity is growing in many places worldwide and there are a lot of purposes of
this
tendency but it could be made some steps to mitigate them. In this
essay
I am going to describe the background and as well as possible ways to solve these problems.
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,essay
First
of all, one of the huge reasons is poor knowledge of criminal legislation by young people. In other
words
a person perhaps can not assume that his or her behaviour is restricted and have to be punished in accordance with the country legislation. By official figures, Add a comma
,words
for example
, around 30 per cent of all offenders among youth have not supposed that their actions are illegal. To break down this
trend it could be possible to include in school
programme legal studies which would exclude some thoughtless steps.
Another cause that needs to be considered is the high amount of unemployed citizens who are in the poverty. It means that the poor could be involved in some criminal, Add a hyphen
in-school
for instance
, drugs trading, fraud, scam or stealing. A possible solution to this
cause would be some special social programmes, which include free short training or retraining courses or also
other stimulation arrangements.
In conclusion, it is clear that a lack of basic understanding of law and unemployment among people will raise crime statistics globally. It is undoubtedly, one immediate practical solution for the above reasons is that the government and local councils should play the lead role to deal with this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite