Some people say that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age of driving cars or riding motorbikes.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays in

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contemporary ,era mostly teenagers and

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some of

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kids used four-wheel or motorbikes for their daily commute. By

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,point some individuals say ,there should be

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regarding the minimum legal

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the driving car. I agree with

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point to a large extent because it is very beneficial for the country as well as for them too. My points about that can be seen in

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paragraphs. There are various reasons for my agreement. The

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and foremost reason is that in some undeveloped country's the laws regarding

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driving vehicle is not very strict. As in

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modern

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most

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teenagers use their own vehicle for their daily commute. To add to

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they have their own cars they show off others by doing some stunts or else by driving at a high speed .

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of that, they might suffer from detrimental accidents.

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, there is a survey regarding in Indian newspaper that around 54% of people meet to

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because of the

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like under 18

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some steps should take by the government to a serious note for legal

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. I think the centre should make some strict rules about not driving vehicles under the

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of 18. Some countries have very strict rules for that while some countries do not take

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on a serious note and do not follow any rules ,

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, so many school

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under the

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of 18 used their two-wheeler for going school and most of them carry three other

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on their vehicle and city police

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of doing punishment they only enjoy

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scene. So for that reason so many

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meet to an accident.

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there should be

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strictrules

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strict rules

regarding driving a car at a legal

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is compulsory. In conclusion, I agree with these points about increasing the minimum legal

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to ride any two-wheeler. By taking some steps it improves road safety as well as

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children

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health.