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Some people say that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age of driving cars or riding motorbikes.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #road #safety #age #cars #motorbikes
Nowadays in
this
 contemporary ,era mostly teenagers and
also
 some of
a
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kids used four-wheel or motorbikes for their daily commute. By
this
 ,point some individuals say ,there should be
increment
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 regarding the minimum legal
age
 the driving car. I agree with
this
 point to a large extent because it is very beneficial for the country as well as for them too. My points about that can be seen in
further
 paragraphs. There are various reasons for my agreement. The
First
 and foremost reason is that in some undeveloped country's the laws regarding
the
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driving vehicle is not very strict. As in
this
 modern
world
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 most
of
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a
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teenagers use their own vehicle for their daily commute. To add to
this
 because
of
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they have their own cars they show off others by doing some stunts or else by driving at a high speed .
As a result
 of that, they might suffer from detrimental accidents.
For instance
, there is a survey regarding in Indian newspaper that around 54% of people meet to
an accidents
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 because of the
age
 like under 18
children
. ,
However
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 some steps should take by the government to a serious note for legal
age
 . I think the centre should make some strict rules about not driving vehicles under the
age
 of 18. Some countries have very strict rules for that while some countries do not take
this
 on a serious note and do not follow any rules ,
for instance
, so many school
children
 under the
age
 of 18 used their two-wheeler for going school and most of them carry three other
children
 on their vehicle and city police
instead
 of doing punishment they only enjoy
this
 scene. So for that reason so many
children
 meet to an accident.
Therefore
 there should be
a
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strictrules
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strict rules
 regarding driving a car at a legal
age
 is compulsory. In conclusion, I agree with these points about increasing the minimum legal
age
 to ride any two-wheeler. By taking some steps it improves road safety as well as
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children
 health.
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