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Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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in recent decades,shaping
children
 s
behavior
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behaviour
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 in the best way becomes a popular title among people.some individuals argue that
punishment
 can be a proper method for forcing
children
 to behave well.while others believe that
encourage
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encouraging
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children
 with rewarding is the better way.
however
 ,from my point of view,
punishment
 has a bad
sideffectn
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side-effect
side-effects
.but,there is
range
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a range
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 of discussion on both side which
i
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I
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 will explain here. on the one hand,it is true that having
children
 even in the best condition is challenging enough.raising
children
 and teaching them what is wrong or right is the hardest part .there is a range of
element
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elements
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 which
affect
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affects
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on
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apply
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their
behavior
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behaviour
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 .
punishment
 can be recognized as a great factor for obeying. it causes
children
become
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to become
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affraid
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afraid
 of their
parents
 and follow their roles.
therefore
,they put their best foot forward to
behaive
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behave
 well and repel their bad
sprit
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spirit
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.
in addition
,they try to get
parents
 satisfactory and do everything they want to do.
therefor
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Therefore
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,
children
 respect them properly.
on the other hand
,rewarding and praising is
another
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other
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factors
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factor
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 for making
children
 behave well. it makes a good relationship between
parents
 and
children
.they become
friend
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friends
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 with
eachother
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each other
therefore
,
children
 do not hide anything from them.
children
 become more mature
becuase
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because
 they can trust
to
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apply
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themseves
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themselves
 and
parents
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their parents
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 trust them.
secondly
 ,
children
 become brave enough to come to their
parents
 and talk about
their
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them their
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 problems and use their
advises
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advice
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.so,
parents
 become a great
rolmodel
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role model
 and
children
 respect them by their heart. in conclusion,
punishment
 and rewarding are
a
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apply
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two factors for raising
children
.as we know some punishments are
illiegal
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illegal
 in lots of countries and make
children
 aggressive
however
 both of them in
some how
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somehow
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 is neseccory for
children
 but
i
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I
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agree with rewarding more than
punishment
.
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