TASK-1 You have recently noticed that your work computer is getting too slow and out-of-date. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain the problems with your computer -give some examples of how this has affected your work -make some suggestions for what can be done to help adress this issue

Dear Mr David, I am writing to you regarding my office desktop, which is five years old and processes jobs a lot slower than before. My desktop’s security app has expired
last
month, which may be the major reason that it is not assisting to process jobs. Every half an hour, my computer is restarting by itself, which I have never experienced in my past jobs.
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of a problem, I was completing my
month end
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reports for the management
last
week, and it decides to restart without any warning.
Consequently
, I have lost all of my work as I did not save it.
In addition
, the license of Windows is asking for renewal. My suggestion to the IT division is to renew my security licence, and a Windows update may be required according to my understanding. I am awaiting your response as it hampers my productivity a lot nowadays. Sincerely yours, Ryan Smith
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