People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don’t take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

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One of the most worrying trends in modern society appears to be toward the
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getting worse even though the public
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the concept of preserving
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trend, as it grows, has attracted attention, in view of the fact that previous generation
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little to the nature. What has driven
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essay. While public media advances in recent years have made
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become more protective
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, these remarkable changes have failed to steer us towards a sustainable future. Mass once-used productions, along with the widespread application of elastic packages, contribute partly to substantial garbage which
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the
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heavily. It is understandable considering that using
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goods would bring
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some
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. What is more, some industries will gain more benefits at the expense of the
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like releasing excess carbon dioxide which would increase the rate of global warming.
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might derive pleasure from these
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, but in order to preserve the ecosystem, some measures
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to implement.
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and foremost, it is evidently reasonable for the government to
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taxes on packing and fines
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throwing litter which will
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people
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more careful about their
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, setting up more recycling places will help
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throw away
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household waste easily.
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but not least, the government has the responsibility to close down some factories that influence the surroundings heavily but perform inefficiently. To replace
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, it is a good way for the government that access to the most updated technology and use
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sufficient funds to rebuild the sustainable factories. To summarize, the
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of harmful
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arises from the fact that personal use much of product that convenient to their life but unsustainable and
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from the fact that the company seize more profit to
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the
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should ring
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alarming bell, and it
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all the society to take attention.

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