When designing a building the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people hold the view that the most vital element when
design
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a building is the intended use of it than its external
design
. While I agree how a building is used is a key factor, I still believe that
the
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outward appearance
also
holds an important role. When it comes to
design
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a building, its functionality must
be prioritize
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.
This
is due to the fact that
a
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construction is built for
it
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specific purposes, if it cannot perform its basic functions
then
its appearance is not worth considering.
For instance
, when the architect
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a hospital, they have to calculate the size and location of each functional room, especially the emergency room has to be located rationally or it may cause problems.
Nevertheless
, I would argue that the intended use of a building may not be the most important when
comparing
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to its outer
design
because of several reasons. A reason worth mentioning is that it could help attract more visitors and boost local tourism.
For example
, Landmark 81 has a unique bamboo
design
,
this
may
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interest
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the interest
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and curiosity of visitors and make them want to come and find out more. In some buildings like
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a hospital
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hospital
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hospitals
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, a patient room
which
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that
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is well-designed can help
patient
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patients
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release stress and enhance their mental well-being. In conclusion, while I agree the intended use of the building is crucial, I am of the opinion that the outer
design
is
also
at the same position.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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