People nowadays are spending more time at workplace and it is argued this is a problem for family life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The demand for daily live provision has impacted the amount of time spent at work

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until some individuals in

this

day and age spend more time at their respective locations of work.

Therefore

,some people have claimed that

this

move will result in family challenges.In my opinion, I strongly believe that families have been on the receiving end due to lack of parental guidance and

children

are prone to negative behaviours. The absence of parental guidance has resulted in negative impacts.

To begin

with,when

children

are left alone without the support of an adult they are not able to make solid decisions on their own since there is no one to guide them through the right choices.

Moreover

,

parents

are responsible

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instilling good morals in their

children

and

therefore

if they are absent

this

creates a loophole for negative teaching.

For example

, research conducted by the

Children

Association Centre reported that 80% of

children

with negative vices are a result of absentee

parents

.

Therefore

,

parents

are not only responsible for guidance but

also

teaching .

On the other hand

,the modern world has seen the rapid development of

children

.

Firstly

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children

mental prowess is faster comparatively because of the exposure,

thus

parents

need to avail themselves to take them through the sudden changes that occur.To illustrate

this

,acceptable cultural morals and behaviours are passed down by

parents

,an adage explains that,if you teach a child the way you want them to grow and they will not part from it.

For instance

,the Luo culture is passed by

parents

to

children

and is carried on to the following generation.

Thus

parents

are responsible for passing on cultural heritage and their absence will water down the importance of culture. In conclusion,As much as there need for

parents

to provide for their

children

by going to work there is a need;

however

, to allocate adequate time to be with their toddlers to provide support in terms of training and passing the relevant cultural norms to them.