People nowadays are spending more time at workplace and it is argued this is a problem for family life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The demand for daily live provision has impacted the amount of time spent at work

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until some individuals in

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day and age spend more time at their respective locations of work.

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,some people have claimed that

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move will result in family challenges.In my opinion, I strongly believe that families have been on the receiving end due to lack of parental guidance and

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are prone to negative behaviours. The absence of parental guidance has resulted in negative impacts.

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are left alone without the support of an adult they are not able to make solid decisions on their own since there is no one to guide them through the right choices.

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,

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are responsible

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instilling good morals in their

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and

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if they are absent

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creates a loophole for negative teaching.

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, research conducted by the

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Association Centre reported that 80% of

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with negative vices are a result of absentee

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.

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,

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are not only responsible for guidance but

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teaching .

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,the modern world has seen the rapid development of

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.

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mental prowess is faster comparatively because of the exposure,

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need to avail themselves to take them through the sudden changes that occur.To illustrate

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,acceptable cultural morals and behaviours are passed down by

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,an adage explains that,if you teach a child the way you want them to grow and they will not part from it.

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,the Luo culture is passed by

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to

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and is carried on to the following generation.

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are responsible for passing on cultural heritage and their absence will water down the importance of culture. In conclusion,As much as there need for

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to provide for their

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by going to work there is a need;

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, to allocate adequate time to be with their toddlers to provide support in terms of training and passing the relevant cultural norms to them.