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Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#globalization #world #culture #identity
Nowadays,
globalization
 plays an essential role in all fields around the world and tends to make people on our planet share a uniform
culture
.
However
, most of the local
culture
, which represents people’s Unique in different areas, will gradually vanish and even cannot be taught to our
next
 generations. In my point of view, in spite of some uniformities which are caused by
globalization
, it has a considerably significant impact on our lifestyles and attitudes toward the world. On one hand, some observers
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concern
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 that
globalization
 results in
standardization
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 of international trade. The local
currency
 as a circulating medium by trading in each country is considered as a characteristic(
charactre
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character
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) in their cultures. When different
countries
 make
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trade with each other, they are required to use the same
currency
 during commerce. To some extent, it will lead to the extinction of local
currency
.
For example
, Deutsche Mark was the exclusive
currency
 among domestic markets in Germany. After most of the European
countries
 started to carry out usage of Euro in 1999, Deutsche Mark was gradually replaced by Euro and it totally stepped off the stage of history until 2002. Many young
german
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 teenagers haven’t
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even heard about Deutsche Mark before. It is a pity that the
currency
 as a part of its
culture
 disappeared forever.
On the other hand
,
globalization
 makes us easily access the
culture
 of other
countries
, including food, fashion, tourism and transport. The most contribution to
globalization
 is the internet. The Internet accelerates the extent of
globalization
. Just like living in a village, it becomes possible that all of us
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 to share different kinds of information anytime anywhere. Everyone can equally learn
others
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 languages or learn to cook diverse national cuisines. It is unimaginable for the people, who feel hard to know anything about other
countries
 or regions in the past. All in all, despite some extinction of local cultures, it is no doubt that with the development of
globalization
, new cultures will concomitantly be born. globalisation is inevitable and we are supposed to enjoy the convenience and benefits of globalisation and contribute to it.
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