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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

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It is believed by scientists that human beings will use the same
language
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 in the future day. From my point of view, there are several advantages and drawbacks affecting social development in many different ways. Communicating with
people
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 from many parts of the world is a plus point for speaking the same
language
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. Indeed, in contemporary society,
people
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 need to learn two or more languages to be able to talk and develop their career whereas using one
language
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 in the whole world can possibly provide a chance to both communicate easily with
people
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 from different nations and impossibly affect their future job.
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, the relationship between two more countries is now improved powerfully. When translating a
language
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 to another
language
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 could feasibly cause several misunderstandings;
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, using a single
language
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 would quickly solve
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 issue and create a close connection between politicians from different countries due to breaking the
language
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 barrier.
On the other hand
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, there are several severe disadvantages whether
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 prediction is imminent. The most serious drawback is that cultural diversity may be devastated. To explain, when human beings just need to learn one
language
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 in their whole life, they don’t have the opportunity to approach other cultures because
people
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 tend to make things easy while learning a new
language
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 offer many complex phases.
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, after hundred years, many cultures will possibly disappear, and it will lead to the loss of cultural diversity. In conclusion, using the same
language
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 has both pros and cons, which is beneficial to communicate with
people
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 from over the world, but could totally destroy cultural diversity.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhanced
  • streamlining
  • diverse cultures
  • accelerate
  • exchange of information
  • erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • dominance
  • unequal power dynamics
  • marginalizing
  • reinforce
  • economic benefits
  • reduced translation
  • diplomacy
  • acquisition
  • exacerbating
  • social inequalities
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