You recently went to a concert and though one of the singers was very good.You want to tell him how you feel Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • Say how you feel about his performance • Give details of your musical activities • Explain how you would like him to help you with you musical activities

Dear Joseph, Yesterday your performance as a drummer at
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youth festival was mind bowling. I was one of the
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and being a drummer myself, I personally
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about writing you a letter about how amazing your performance was. I have been studying
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university for
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18 months and being a student of the
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and arts college I had
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opportunity to attend the youth fest event, yesterday. I got a keen interest in playing the drums and
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have been practising for
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6 months.
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would be obliged if you can take some timeout to analyse my
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and provide me with some notes on how to improvise my
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. Some of the issues
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have been facing are am not able to sync with my fellow band members during our jamming sessions and
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experienced drummer, some insights from you will surely help me out. Hoping to hear from you soon Regards
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  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
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