The graphs illustrate the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graphs illustrate the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The given line graph illustrates how many
visitors
travelled to a particular
Caribbean
island
over the course of 7 years starting from 2010. In general, the total
number
of tourists visiting the
Caribbean
island
always increased during the whole period.
Additionally
, the figure for
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
was lower than that for those choosing to stay on the
island
during most of the period. In 2010, the total quantity of tourists travelling to the
Caribbean
island
stood at exactly 1
million
, with 75.000 of them opting for staying on the
island
,
whereas
the rest decided to stay on
cruise
ships
. Over the following 2 years,
while
there was an insignificant drop to reach the lowest point of just below 0.25
million
in the
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
, staying on the
island
was still a more popular choice with 1.25
million
visitors
. In the final year, the
Caribbean
island
witnessed a sharp rise to 3.5
million
in the total
number
of
visitors
.
Likewise
, the
number
of tourists who stayed on
cruise
ships
experienced a sharp increase to precisely 2
million
, surpassing the figure for those staying on the
island
(1.5
million
).
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