Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are encounter-challenging the quality of life. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries.
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challenges
life
quality
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will construct greater
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a greater
outcome
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outcomes
it
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issues
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may be
maybe
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may be
countries
.
On the one hand, managing nature
problems
globally due to producing great effects on quality
of life
because the nature
variety and geography reasons , if devoting the international organization to solve this
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this problem
these problems
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the
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nature
and Environmental. So, authorities can passed
laws and control to follow rules by all Change the verb form
pass
countries
. Secondly
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ways to solve Replace the word
economic
nature
problems
and produce the
better effects on Correct article usage
apply
life
quality
. It seems the information and extensive solutions are more effective and has better results.
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addressing
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globally maybe has
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more focus and should control carefully. In the following, every Change the verb form
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countries
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country
the
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issues
better than other international organization such
as famine and drought. So, producing great effects on life
quality
may done
by individual counties in better ways. But in my Change the verb form
be done
view point
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viewpoint
that is
not the best solution for territory issues
.
In conclusion, it appears solving issues
globally is greater than managing that by individual countries
due to supporting that by international organizations, passing general laws and focus
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focusing
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