The graphs illustrate the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graphs illustrate the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph shows the
number
of tourists in millions who travelled to a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017. Generally, there is a rise in the trend of
visitors
that reached 3.5
million
over a course of 7 years.
Furthermore
, those who preferred to stay on
cruise
ships
outnumbered those who stayed on the
island
. In 2010, the total quantity of tourists
traveling
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to the Caribbean
island
stood at exactly 1
million
, with 75.000 of them opting for staying on the
island
,
whereas
the rest decided to stay on
cruise
ships
. Over the following 2 years,
while
there was an insignificant drop to reach the lowest point of just below 0.25
million
in the
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
, staying on the
island
was still a more popular choice with 1.25
million
visitors
. In the final year, the Caribbean
island
witnessed a sharp rise to 3.5
million
in the total
number
of
visitors
.
Likewise
, the
number
of tourists who stayed on
cruise
ships
experienced a sharp increase to precisely 2
million
, surpassing the figure for those staying on the
island
(1.5
million
).
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