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Technology is being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

#technology #education
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It is argued that
technology
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 plays a vast role in the
education
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sector
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. It is essential that to use the
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 in schools and universities to obtain knowledge of current
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. We all understand the importance of
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 during the Covid -19 pandemic.
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education
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sector
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 is trying to emerge the usage of the internet, application, and gadgets to speed up the system. When we speak about the advantage of technologies, there are several facts. One of the major factors that
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-supported during Covid 19 breaks down to the
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sector
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. Imagine the absence of
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 during the pandemic situation, it would have been a loss of time for schooling and higher
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. The convenience of accessing the information for our
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 is easier and faster compared with
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 with
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 and without
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, if you want to refer to a book for your assignment, no need to visit the library. It is not time-consuming with the help of internet search and filtering options.
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 changes human
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 drastically which is required in
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 division too. Even though there are significant advantages available in
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, there are still several arguments that discourage the influence of
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 in
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 as some parents are worrying that kids’ involvement in gadgets may reduce their physical activities. Anyhow, there are two sides to every coin, which it may argue as an advantage or disadvantage in
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 subject. Considering the emerging
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 in every
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, it is recommended that the
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’s
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-learning
  • digital literacy
  • multimedia resources
  • online collaboration
  • virtual classrooms
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • learning management systems
  • adaptive learning
  • screen time
  • tech-savvy
  • cyberbullying
  • digital equity
  • edtech (educational technology)
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