It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some individuals suggest that in order to become athletes or artists,

people

should have special

talents

since they were born, while others argued that those

talents

can be taught and developed in childhood.

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although

children

with an inborn gift for a specific activity are quick learners, nothing is important than an

endeavor

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for becoming a popular musician or a famous

sport

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player. On the one hand, natural-inborn

talents

help

people

achieve their

goal

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easily.

People

with

this

specific gift spend less time learning and their performance

are

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flawless. Some of them can become professionals at a very young age without any

efforts

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.

For instance

, a lot of art academies disclosed that student who

born

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with special gift learns piano lessons two times faster than normal students and successes in

this

career path by being

a

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famous pianist within a few years.

However

, I believe that where there is a will, there is a way.

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strong determination, normal

children

are able to learn specific lessons

such

as sports or music.

This

means that everyone can learn those special skills.

Although

the ones who do not

born

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with

this

talent have to spend more time learning and developing their performance, it is possible for them to follow their dream and become superstars in the future.

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everybody said, practice makes perfect. If these

children

keep

practicing

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, their outcome will be as they expected. In the end, they can be a musician or an athlete as they wish.

For example

, at

first

, Micheal Jordan was not good at playing basketball. He failed his high school basketball team’s selection but he never gave up and kept trying.

As a result

, in the end, he was extremely successful and became one of the most popular basketball players. In conclusion, even though it is easier to teach

people

born with

talents

, effort plays an important role

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achievement.

Therefore

, it is possible for

children

who

born

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are born

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without any

talents

to learn and become a

sports

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sportsperson

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person

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people

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or an artist in one day.