It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views and give your opinion
Some individuals suggest that in order to become athletes or artists,
people
should have special talents
since they were born, while others argued that those talents
can be taught and developed in childhood. This
essay argued that although
children
with an inborn gift for a specific activity are quick learners, nothing is important than an endeavor
for becoming a popular musician or a famous Change the spelling
endeavour
sport
player.
On the one hand, natural-inborn Change the noun form
sports
talents
help people
achieve their goal
easily. Fix the agreement mistake
goals
People
with this
specific gift spend less time learning and their performance are
flawless. Some of them can become professionals at a very young age without any Change the verb form
is
efforts
. Fix the agreement mistake
effort
For instance
, a lot of art academies disclosed that student who born
with special gift learns piano lessons two times faster than normal students and successes in Add a missing verb
were born
this
career path by being a
famous pianist within a few years. Correct article usage
apply
However
, I believe that where there is a will, there is a way.
On the other hand
, with the
strong determination, normal Correct article usage
apply
children
are able to learn specific lessons such
as sports or music. This
means that everyone can learn those special skills. Although
the ones who do not born
with Change the verb form
bear
this
talent have to spend more time learning and developing their performance, it is possible for them to follow their dream and become superstars in the future. Like
everybody said, practice makes perfect. If these Replace the word
As
children
keep practicing
, their outcome will be as they expected. In the end, they can be a musician or an athlete as they wish. Change the spelling
practising
For example
, at first
, Micheal Jordan was not good at playing basketball. He failed his high school basketball team’s selection but he never gave up and kept trying. As a result
, in the end, he was extremely successful and became one of the most popular basketball players.
In conclusion, even though it is easier to teach people
born with talents
, effort plays an important role for
Change preposition
in
the
achievement. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, it is possible for children
who born
without any Add a missing verb
are born
talents
to learn and become a sports
Correct your spelling
sportsperson
person
or an artist in one day.Fix the agreement mistake
people
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