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Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job To what extent do you agree?

#university #guarantees #people #job
Studying at the best universities mostly leads individuals to
work
 in
well known
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 companies. People who graduate from highly ranked universities mostly get higher positions immediately whenever they start their
career
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careers
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. I think that
besides
 the
immensive
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immersive
immense
 school
degree
, the personality of the student
also
 plays
such
 an important role in
this
.
Work life
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 and University experience are bluntly bonded to each other. Students who manage to get into the top colleges,
they
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apply
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prove themselves to firms that they have a schedule
that is
 disciplined and well planned. Getting into top colleges requires constant study and a
well prepared
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work
 programme.
Moreover
, a perfect diploma
degree
 will make an impact on
work
 owners that these diploma owners are intelligent. To get a good faculty
degree
 people
have
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 to be smart as well. Head hunters of companies are always in search of intelligent, hardworking individuals with high bachelor's degrees. Companies mostly make these people start from the top
such
 as; being a manager, a principal or an administrator.
Furthermore
, for
firms
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 it is not enough to have a
well completed
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 college life. They
also
 require their workers to be compatible with the
work
 environment and their coworkers as well.
Moreover
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 they ask for their workers to be in control of their emotions and know how to communicate in case of an argument or a problematic situation. In conclusion, a bachelor's
degree
 with excellent marks will play a big role in which
title
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 person will start their career. Being in control of your emotions and yourself will
also
 be a need, to get accepted to higher positions.
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