Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
in
this
modern era, most people leave their homes very early at dawn and returns
very late at night Correct subject-verb agreement
return
due to
the nature of Correct article usage
the works
works
they do. Fix the agreement mistake
work
therefore
, hardly do people know their co-tenants especially
in the urban areas. could Add the comma(s)
, especially
such
behaviour be harmful? what are some possible solutions for this
attitude? in this
essay, some of the negative effects will be discussed and some suggested ideas to help curb such
problems will be made.
on the one hand, most people are left isolated and hence
depression may set in. for
instance, the rate at which individuals are committing suicide in their rooms Capitalize word
For
are
alarming these days. there is a saying that, a problem shared is half solved. when there is no communication between them, nobody cares about what the other person is going through. to add to the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
first,
in cases of emergencies at workplaces, it will be very hard to identify the individual's home.
some possible solutions can be put in place. firstly
, society must develop the habit of exchanging greetings with their co-neighbours. this
is because one might not know the day and time he might be of
need. Change preposition
in
secondly
, parties could be organized in their various homes to unite them. by
so doing, they will get to know themselves well and assist each other. Capitalize word
By
however
, other forms of communication could be used if the physical approach could be difficult. for example
, every household could create a social media platform such
as a WhatsApp account, skype and
Facebook account Correct word choice
or
of
which they could share their pictures and communicate.
in conclusion, Change preposition
apply
although
most communities want to live their private lives in this
modern century, not being able to identify your housemates and communicate well with them is causing more harm than good. the public should find ways to have a good bond with their neighbours irrespective of the nature of their works
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