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Some people think that big international sporting events are not worthwhile for the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #events #host #country
In the tech-savvy
era
, it is irrefutable fact that humankind has increased tremendously and the current day is enriched with new innovations. In the tech-savvy
era
, it is irrefutable fact that humankind has increased tremendously and the current
era
 is enriched with divergent types of transportation. In the tech-savvy
era
, it is irrefutable fact that humankind has increased tremendously and the current
era
 is enriched with pollution and harmful gases. Pollution is the contamination of the natural environment and resources with toxic elements. The real wealth of an individual is hard work and nobody can become successful without it. As the outcome of the rapid globalization process, in the contemporary world, travelling has become more available, compared to the previous centuries. India holds the reputation of having multifarious historic places and monuments because
this
 land has supported many civilizations of having different races and religions.
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