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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

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The students' assessments have always been a highly controversial issue. It is believed that testing is becoming more and more popular by many
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 of recurrent assessment.
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 essay will discuss the pros and cons of mid-term or final exams. Looking at the positive side, there is no shadow of a doubt that one single testing could provide a rivalry role
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the learning process rather than periodic
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 is evidenced by junior schools in Iran, where children have received a reward and applauded in front of the crowd after earning an acceptable grade in
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, by monthly analysis, eductors have the tendency to prepare themselves and organize a study plan for the scrutinies and eventually make good in
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 , being evaluated through final
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 could bring several benefits in different domains of skill enhancement. Looking at the negative sides,
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 of all,unlike the recurrent assessments , enlistments do not have the opportunity for trying harder and make up their mistakes as they might be scrutinized once only.
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 way of judging might cause a huge amount of pressure on the test takers as
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 could be the only chance for them and they may miss the chance of reaching their goals
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 of excess affective burden.
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, in Japan, there is a staggering rate of depression among high school students due to the fact that they feel insecure and have a lack of confidence in evaluation. To conclude, sessional experiments is less popular with people rather than monthly trials which have several shortcomings
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 as exacerbating emotional hardships and
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 deprival.
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, it has a myriad of advantages
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 as playing a rewarding role and
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 competitive as well as preparing an organized plan for students.
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