In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction tv crime dramas?

It is true that the stories about criminals are watched more and more in recent t
ime.
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This
essay will present some reasons why they are popular and my opinion about
this
genre.
People
usually watch
crime
novels and TV
crime
dramas because of their content and image.
Firstly
, these
films
are invested a lot of money f
or
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action scenes which are compelling us. Many criminals' life secrets are strange with normal life, so we tend to be curious about these.
Additionally
, these
films
show clearly p
ycho's
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psycho's
characters from beginning to the end of
c
rime
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the crime
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process which makes us wonder what
n
ext
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the next
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l
aw breakers
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will do.
As a result
, we have to follow the
next
scenes. In my opinion, novels and
films
c
ontain
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violet and
crime
would have n
agative
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negative
impacts on
people
's m
ind.
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minds
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For example
, I have seen in the news that a 1
5 year olds
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boy stole his father's money by using m
otheds
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methods
that he saw i
n
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on
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TV to show off with friends. In
this
case, the boy h
ave
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copied the
crime
to treat his father, but if he still studies a d
angrous
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dangerous
way, the result would be more n
agative.
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negative
Therefore
, t
he
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crime
produced
films
should warn their audiences about unrealistic activities.
Besides
, some violet scenes, guns and k
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knives
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nifes
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knives
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should be b
an
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with young under 18 years olds in order to protect them. In conclusion, there are some reasons causing i
nterested
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feelings when
people
see
crime
novels and TV
crime
movies in many countries recently. I believe that t
hese
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this
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crime
content would affect
people
, especially teenagers, so we have to make some rules for these.
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