Some people believe that the government should not spend money on International aid when they have their own disadvantaged people like homeless and unemployed. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals hold the view that the
government
should not spend Use synonyms
money
on international assistance if they have not solved poverty in their own country.
The main reason is that one of the major aims of the Use synonyms
government
is to improve domestic citizens’ living standards. Use synonyms
Thus
they should make full use of their Linking Words
money
to solve Use synonyms
people
’s difficulties that inhibit them to lead a happy life, Use synonyms
such
as homelessness and unemployment. If Linking Words
government
revenue is poured into international Use synonyms
aid
, it means less or insufficient Use synonyms
money
will be employed in their own nation’s socially-disadvantaged Use synonyms
people
, resulting in that the hardships facing Use synonyms
people
can not Use synonyms
be
tackled instantly and completely.
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However
, I do not agree with Linking Words
this
opinion personally. Linking Words
That is
because the problems mentioned above are impossible to be solved within a short time, which is usually associated with some rooted reasons, Linking Words
such
as wealth distribution among different classes, education problems and so on. Yet when a country that needs International Linking Words
aid
may relate to unpredictable natural disasters, earthquakes and tsunami Use synonyms
for example
. In order to save lives as much as possible and arrange their life, the nation, especially undeveloped or small countries, longs to receive help from others, ranging from Linking Words
money
to Use synonyms
people
and supplies. Use synonyms
Thus
, I argue the Linking Words
government
of other nations should assist to save lives and cope with the sudden suffering, which is a respect to life and international responsibility.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
government
should be financially involved in International Use synonyms
aid
even if there are some disadvantaged Use synonyms
people
in their own country. Use synonyms
That is
because participating in International Linking Words
aid
could save plenty of lives and poverty can only be solved in a long term.Use synonyms
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