In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In school, some students study harder and devote more energy than others; it is the same with individuals in the workplace. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reason and analyze whether it is always beneficial for average Linking Words
people
.
In some Use synonyms
people
’s opinion, those Use synonyms
people
’s behaviour is rather difficult to imagine or understand, even with the idea that they are stupid. Use synonyms
However
, compared with temporary happiness gained from watching TV or playing games, these students and workers pursue a sense of fulfilment, because they enjoy the process of concentrating on their Linking Words
work
, dedicating to it and achieving something. Use synonyms
Besides
, the exterior temptation is another reason. Linking Words
For example
, some children study hard before a final exam, just because they long for the awards, Linking Words
such
as pocket money or a long-expected toy, provided by their parents.
Just as I mentioned above, it is a good thing, as individuals could gain mental or material enjoyment by diligent Linking Words
work
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
this
is not always a good thing, since sometimes there are other more important and pressing matters. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
people
who are not in good condition should prioritize their own body Use synonyms
health
, which is the basis for their later Use synonyms
work
and life. If they, ignoring their Use synonyms
health
, just pay attention to Use synonyms
work
or study, their Use synonyms
health
in fact are ruined. Use synonyms
Thus
, working hard is not always a good thing and Linking Words
people
should Use synonyms
work
according to specific conditions.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
work
hard for internal and external reasons, in chase of inner peace or outer materials Use synonyms
for instance
. Linking Words
However
, it is not always a good thing if they Linking Words
work
too hard to neglect particular cases, jeopardizing their Use synonyms
health
sometimes.Use synonyms
Submitted by 1378468145 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?