You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home happened, which means that you must change the date of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain the important event • apologize for the situation • suggest a new arrangement

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Hi Tom, Howdy? I am sure you are looking forward to my visiting you in England

week Friday, well that won't happen again. I just got a message that one of my cousins is getting married same

week Friday, so I can't go anywhere at the moment. To say that I am sorry is an understatement, I know we have put lots of effort into the planning and arrangement of

this

visit.

However

, you know how it is, family calls and you have to answer.

On the other hand

, all hope is not lost because I can still come the

Friday after the wedding ceremony. Once the event is over, my mum would expect me to help sort things out and arrange the house properly,

this

should take less than 6 days I think. So with 6 days out of the way, I have just a day to pack and make the journey, what do you think about that? You'll need to check your calendar and let me know in time

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if the scheduled time is perfect or not. I am eagerly looking forward to visiting again, to be honest. The memory of my

last

visit still lingers, so I am ready to make more memories. Hit me back mate and let's conclude on

this

. Take care and cheers. Best Wishes, Rotimi

Submitted by rotimiolajitan on Tue Dec 07 2021

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

225 words

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