Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in life. What do you think are reasons for this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

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people
are
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of the opinion that having a child late is
good
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decision. While I admit that it is
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plan for the future of children , I believe that being parents early is the best way in many cases. Some
people
of
this
century agree
with
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that having a child requires a big responsibility and certain conditions . If someone wants to have a kid, they think over special needs
such
as a house, career and car. In order to achieve these goals, they do their best and spend
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main period of their
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lives
life
lifes
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.
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, perhaps, having a little angel will turn into the
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plan and sometimes it leads
people
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. From my point of view, the sense of parenthood makes everyone broad-minded and responsible in any
situations
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. If marriage is considered the thing which changes someone's life to 180°(a hundred and eighty degrees) , being
parent
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is a part of
this
. The reason
of
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this
is as if a new world was created by you and its tomorrow
is belong
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to you. If you can put the balance between the family and work, you have never
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.
Although
,
people
think that having children is not
good
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variant without appropriate conditions ,
but
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it is proved that
people
who are parents look
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the world from many edges.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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