Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and include and give your opinion Give any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the 21st century, human
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became more complex and busy. Ostensively, some
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that doing
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thing makes
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more boring but others
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that it is an essential source for
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life
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.In
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with
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examples.
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, exploring new
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and routines makes everyone's
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more lively and happy.
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creative ideas, scientific innovations, new theories related to various subjects and
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for day-to-day problems. Admittedly, all the discoveries of
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creations of
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Freud, (father of psychology) described that
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are inevitable that makes human beings more creative and adaptive persons.
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, scientists like Albert Einstein, Newton, Charles Babbage etc are famous because of their innovations that create
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of
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modification in human society.
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, all
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are not good for
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because
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may
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problems and
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adjustment
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issues in
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. To illustrate
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night and day persons whereas the night person selected study early morning it will affect his academic career because he is not active in
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early morning compared
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, any
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that
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through external or internal force result
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, it will give physical and mental stress among
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. so that means without satisfaction any
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are unsuccessful. In conclusion, there is a saying 'every coin has two sides'
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every
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changes
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has two sides.
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, our decisions are more important and
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should be relevant for the situations.
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, whoever
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new exploration make sure that it will not harm others.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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