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Being Being able to speak a foreign language can be helpful in many situations in life. Some people believe that children should begin studying a foreign language in primary school while others believe children should not start until secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In recent years, most schools are including foreign
languages
 in their
school
 curriculum. It is believed by some that
children
 should learn a foreign
language
 in elementary
school
, while there are others who believe that they should start learning
this
 after secondary
school
. In my opinion, at an early age,
children
 can easily learn and remember new things and that's why they should learn new
languages
 at primary
school
. Nowadays, learning a foreign
language
 has become very popular and schools are encouraging
this
 by providing facilities to
study
 different types of
languages
,
for example
, German, Spanish, Russian etc. In the same way, students are
also
 showing interest in studying all these
languages
.
In addition
 to
this
, Some students face difficulty studying a new
language
 after secondary
school
 because after that they want to focus more on subjects like science, mathematics, economics and they are on the way to make their career and
hence
 they do not want to learn anything new, which they do not feel important for them.
For instance
, after secondary
school
, I had to
study
 the German
language
 in which
i
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 was not interested and I always felt that I am wasting my time and I should
study
 my major.
On the other hand
, at primary schools,
children
 are curious to learn new things and they quickly grasp all the things. At an early age, their young mind has the ability to remember and learn fastly and effectively.
For instance
, a report published in a magazine tells that 88% of kids who were studying a new
language
 at primary
school
, speak better than those who
study
 it at higher secondary. In conclusion, after secondary
school
,
children
 have different priorities, they understand which is useful for them and they better know their interests and there is already so much pressure on them and because of that it a good idea to introduce foreign
language
 at primary
school
.
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