There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

The assessment approach of a
student
’s achievements changes every time, to look out which method is best. Due to
this
reason a new trend of assessing
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exam
results
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became more popular rather than
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during semester time. There are arguments on both sides,
however
, which we will discuss here. On the one hand, scoring
student
knowledge by the
exam
result
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gives a clear and transparent viewing of his or her understanding of materials, which has been given throughout the course. On the
exam
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the professor or examiner could ask from fundamental to more detailed questions and
finally
make a conclusion which point is suitable to the
student
.
For
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a classman who learned all the given curriculum and has a good understanding of it
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finally
will show good results on
exam
day. But, it has negative aspects
also
,
such
as corruption which takes a place in
this
form of evaluation which leads to some negative effects.
Furthermore
, some lectures contribute and encourage
such
action, even if the
student
has prepared for the
exam
and
such
attitude of lecture demotivates the
last
one.
This
attitude can lead to the destruction of the education system.
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it takes effect on the quality of
student
education, and
further
on professional skills. Overall, each letter system has its own advantages and disadvantages. Anyway, every method is just an offer to improve education in common. And if we would like to work it, everyone has to make their own investigation to reach a good result at the end.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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