A museum is near your home looking for people to do part time unpaid work. You would like to do some unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Wendy, I have read on your websites about employing a part-time voluntary job, so I am writing

this

email to

apply

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this

position in your museum. Recently, I visited your

musem

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museum

with my students. The historical images and

doccuments

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documents

about Vietnamese wars impressed us so much because I like to research them.

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I think if I have

chance

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to work in the museum, I would have opportunities to study

about

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Vietnamese history.

In particular

, I worked as

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library staff, so I can instruct

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tourists.

Besides

, my organization skill for events is quite good because I have hosted a lot of campaigns when I was a student. I can take full part-time

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summer, so if you feel that I am suitable for

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job, please contact me via

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email. I look forward to hearing your email! Best regard, Wendy

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The Closing

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Yours faithfully,

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Yours sincerely,

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Best regards,
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A museum is near your home looking for people to do part time unpaid work. You would like to do some unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply.

The Closing

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