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Nuclear energy is better than other sources of energy for meeting the ever-increasing global energy need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The end of the 20th century witnessed a tremendous increase in the use of nuclear
energy
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, especially for European countries where natural resources are scarce. Nowadays, a societal debate has risen upon whether countries should continue using nuclear
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 or should they switch to a greener way of producing
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.
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 essay completely agrees with the idea that governments should implement new strategies for their electric consumption.
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 and foremost, atomic
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 represents a huge threat to the environment.
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, no one can deny that nuclear
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 has provided the needed
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 for thousands of households,
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, myriads of questions are still unanswered by engineers, one of them is how we should manage the irradiated waste, the infected detritus represents a tremendous threat for the flora and fauna.
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, the quantity of water used in the mechanism of creating
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 is simply outrageous especially during
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 period of global warming, those two factors showcase how big is the urge to move on to a greener solution.
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, there are plenty of solutions now available for the governments, as solar plants and wind farms appear to be a great alternative for fission
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. They can provide electricity for an everlasting period since solar and wind resources are infinite, not only that but those innovative developments are economically profitable for companies and
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 for countries so that new job offers will be created. To conclude, citizens are getting more and more concerned about electricity production, and debate has provoked a huge backlash in society, it is now time for humans to switch to another way of production,
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 may result in big changes especially on how capitalism works
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