Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

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In today's world when there are
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of options for
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to travel
people
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are travelling more. In recent times due to globalisation,
opprtunities
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opportunities
are everywhere and
people
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who are willing to
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succeed
need to travel from one place to another.
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from one city to another or even from one country to another country. Previously there were very few options but now due to increased competition there are multiple options in almost every mode like, by road or by air are
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available
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long
people
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believe that, if a person travels to different places he or she will get good
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exposure
to changing world. Will get good knowledge about other cultures or even can learn new things. In my
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traveller will get these benefits.
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the traveller
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traveller
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will get a chance to see other places,
experince
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experience
new things, food, culture, heritage and so on.
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Traveller
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will gain
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good confidence when he or she will come out of his shell and explore the new world outside his or
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her home
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  • Cultural exchange
  • International business
  • Heritage sites
  • Cosmopolitan
  • Global citizen
  • Study abroad
  • Standard of living
  • Destination
  • Itinerary
  • Online bookings
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  • Sustainable travel
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